Wednesday, 13 November 2013

Critical Reflection (Final)


                The essay writing experience in this course has truly enabled me to enhance my academic writing ability. In this learning process, I was taught to do various preparation work before the actual essay writing, such as analysing articles to obtain significant information, writing a reader response which is a thought provoking practice, and doing citation exercises to avoid plagiarism. From these preparation exercises, I realised the fact that there are certain techniques behind the production of a good essay, and it is not merely about bombastic language and abstruse content.

                At the start of the course, my essays tended to be more descriptive rather than critical. Most of the time my arguments were also too vague or beating around the bush due to phrasing problems and the lack of solid examples. In this essay writing exercise, I have learned to present arguments more distinctively by providing clear thesis statement and topic sentences, following by coherent elaboration with evidence. This is achieved by doing a lot of reading and writing practices throughout the module. I learned to sieve through readings such as articles and journals and filter the important information needed for essay writing, and through these readings I see how good writers present their ideas in a logical and systematic way. Previous summary practices are also helpful in identifying crucial information and improving my paraphrasing skills, while reader response practices strengthen my evaluative writing ability. When equipped with abundant and analysed information, it is much easier to develop arguments gradually in an essay.

                However, there is still room for improvement for my writing, particularly grammar and sentence structure. Although I learned common mistakes in grammar in class and did online grammar exercises, it is a long cultivated habit to write in my usual way and commit the same mistakes. Therefore, it is not easy to change in a short period of time, but I should continue to do more grammar exercises and if possible, do peer review of essays and assignments in the future so that I can be aware of my mistakes and prevent making the same error.

                In conclusion, the essay writing process enhanced my essay organisation skills and the ability to demonstrate more insightful arguments. However my writing skills are still not mature enough and I should continue to improve and strive for excellence.

Monday, 4 November 2013

Essay On Globalisation (Final Final)

           In today’s world, borderlines of nations have become increasingly undefined due to the characteristics of globalisation. It has largely impacted the way of international interactions, and the mobility of globalisation has created various problems, including environmental destruction, media and cultural erosion, and even widening income gap. This essay would pertain specifically to the problem of widening income gap, with particular focus on Singapore’s society and its current tax policy.

           The rise of globalisation has accelerated the formation of Multinational Companies (MNCs), which are companies with a worldwide approach to markets and productions (Globalisation, 2013). MNCs often adopt the policy of production outsourcing, which indirectly leads to income inequality between the skilled workers and the unskilled (or less-skilled) workers. Both were hired in large numbers as a result of the policy, however the former is more valued and favoured, receiving a much higher salary as compared to the latter. Therefore it becomes a problem, which is particularly common in the developed countries, as the gap between the skilled and unskilled workforce is even greater than the developing countries. On the surface, it seems that income inequality is not a serious problem as it only shows the difference between the higher and lower end income within a country. Indeed, a certain extent of inequality actually encourages investment and maintains the country’s economic competitiveness. However, studies from the University of Birmingham have shown that income disparity has a correlation with health and social problems, where greater inequality leads to greater status anxiety as “it places people in a hierarchy that increases status competition and causes stress, which leads to poor health and other negative outcomes”  (Rowlingson, 2011). There is also a potential risk of increasing crime rates and decomposition of social cohesion due to psychological anxiety. Therefore it is important to raise public awareness on this issue in order to prevent these problems from arising.

Singapore, as a fairly developed country, has also been affected by the waves of globalisation. Looking at the Gini Coefficient, a calculated figure ranging from 0 to 1 determining the extent of income gap within a country, Singapore has a high ratio of 0.437, which is not very far away from the world’s highest value of 0.7. Thus the Singapore government places much attention on this issue, and has been implementing various policies to ease the problem of widening income gap, such as the progressive tax policy. Under this policy, tax rates are determined based on different amounts of income earned by each individual.  Households whose income is below a certain amount are allowed to be exempted from paying taxes, and simultaneously receive government subsidies to assist them in meeting financial demands. This policy is effective in equalising the income gap by placing a greater responsibility on the high earners, thus lessening the wealth disparity after the reduction of tax payments. However in recent years, personal income tax rates were readjusted in an attempt to attract foreign professional workforce and at the same time retain its own talents. Marginal tax rates were modified, ranging from the lowest end of 2% to the highest end of 20% in 2012, as compared to the range of 4% to 22% in 2005 (IRAS: Income tax rates, 2013). The problem with this policy is that it ultimately benefits the people at the higher end much more than the lower end, which leads to an even greater income gap. To improve the situation, the government can re-establish the tax rates on the higher income categories, which proved to be more effective in the previous years by comparing the Gini Coefficient. They can also refer to the United States and Canada’s earned income tax credit (EITC), a refundable tax credit for low- and medium-income individuals and couples (Earned income tax credit, 2013), to further balance the income gap.

Besides, faced with the grim reality of globalisation, the policy to exclude taxes on capital gains in Singapore has exacerbated the wealth disparity as well. Capital gain is the income generated from selling assets, including buildings, equipment and shares of a corporation. These incomes are categorised under the capital income, which is separated from the taxable revenue income. However those who possess these capital assets are usually affluent or high-net-worth individuals, by selling capital assets they gained even greater wealth. Without taxing the capital gain, the high earners are getting richer, while the low and middle earners remain relatively the same.  As such, the government should revise their policy and impose a taxation model similar to the progressive tax system on capital gain. Although this might lead to attempts to avoid tax, it is still a way to garner budgets in assisting the poor and balancing the unequal wealth distribution.

           In conclusion, globalisation has worsened the problem of income inequality which can lead to severe social and economic consequences. However in Singapore, the existing policies are insufficient in countering the broadening gaps. By considering reinstatement of tax policies with the aim of shifting the financial burden from the less affluent to the more capable high-net-worth individuals, the situation can be largely improved, creating a more stable and prosperous society.


References:

Earned income tax credit. (2013). Retrieved from Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Earned_income_tax_credit
Globalisation. (2013). Retrieved from Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Globalization
Income Tax in Singpore. (2013). Retrieved from Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Income_tax_in_Singapore
IRAS: Income tax rates. (2013). Retrieved from Inland Revenue Authority of Singapore : https://www.iras.gov.sg/irashome/page04.aspx?id=1190
Rowlingson, K. (2011). Does Income Inequality Cause Health and Social Problems? Joseph Rowntree Foundation.