The article states that globalisation commits to the destruction
of environment. International trading brought by globalisation promotes
consumerism, resulting in increased skidding throughout the world, such as fishing,
deforestation and expansion of factories. In fact, pollution generated by one
country passes on to other countries, especially in the case of air pollution. Although
globalisation is not the sole factor of global warming, it serves as a
catalyst. However the situation is not as bad as it seems, provided that there
is effective global governance. The current system is inefficient in controlling
the situation, and crucial parties are reluctant or incompetent to contribute
their power. Non-governmental organisations’ efforts are remarkable, but the
cooperation between global forces in addressing environmental problems is still
of utmost importance.
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The article states that globalisation commits(Wrong word) to the destruction of (^)environment. International trading brought (^) by globalisation promotes consumerism, resulting in increased skidding(???) throughout the world, such as fishing, deforestation and (^) expansion of factories...However the situation is not as bad as it seems, provided that there is effective global governance. The current system is inefficient in controlling the situation, and crucial parties are //reluctant or incompetent to contribute their power (Rearrange this section) \\. Non-governmental organisations’ efforts are remarkable, but the cooperation between global forces in addressing environmental problems is still of (^) utmost importance.
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